Sunday, June 5, 2011

If Zombies Invade Your School Part 1

Hey! I'm gonna write a story in parts, starting with this one. Also, the main character narrates this story. This story may be turned into a short movie.

I'm Patrick. Patrick X. My last name is unpronounceable and unspellable. So, I'm known as just Patrick X. Summer just ended, and I'm going to school to see who my 5th grade teacher is.

Going into the building again was a shock, but I somehow lived though it. "Class take your seats!" snapped Mrs. Sty.

Yep, I got Mrs. Sty. We call her Mrs. Pigsty. She's the meanest of the bunch. "I am Mrs. Sty, your 5th grade teacher. I can tell you 5th grade will be the toughest thing you have ever faced, but you urchins will live though it. Hopefully. Now, Owen, weapons are not tolerated, and any you have will be confiscated."

"Like this?" Owen asked as he knocked Mrs. Sty unconscious with a bowling ball. Then as you can imagine, everybody started going crazy, until our principal showed up.

"How's everybody going? I'm your new principal, Dr. P.T.. Teacher is unconscious, I see. Great!" said Dr. P.T..

"Uh, good?" Sam said. Sam Endower is the guy you can count on for a distraction.

"No! It's not going good!" snapped Olivia. Olivia Capworth is the girl most guys are into.

"Don't mind Olivia, she's on a medication that makes her say random stuff," said Cole. Cole Struggle is the quick thinking strategist you can count on to quickly spit something out.

"Hey, I think it's gym time," said Timmy. Timmy Observe, (pronounced ob pause servvve) is strong, buff, and comes up with sports related excuses/escape routes.

"Yes well, later I will be holding an assembly," said Dr. P.T..



  1. Super start to the story Patrick - I can't wait for the next part!

  2. Awesome beginning to the story !!!! Great job !!,!

  3. it is like wimpy kid
    can't wait till part 2!!!!!! =o

  4. I appretiate the positive feedback.

  5. I am so relieved that you didn't bring a bowling ball to school. Whew!